Interesting poem but i feel it is not really a haiku.
Haiku has an element of antithesis, unexpected twist, juxtaposition of nature and human, objective and subjective.
Plus your lines sound awkward grammatically.
you can write incomplete sentences but yours leave an impression of fragments
First line or better first two lines should not be about you.
You also used to many excessive words, you can say the same with much less
If to refrase your idea in haiku style, it would look something like that

Low clouds
light cotton on the brows
Not tired anymore

Syllabus-count is secondary but if you want you can try to refrase the poem to fit the count again.

cool development!