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DEFINTION OF TIME (OCTOBER CONTEST Under 200 words)

Time is a manifestation of the
Human Mind
Once man FINALLY established
that the Sun was actually static
and the Earth went around
then one circle
became equal to 24 hours
‘’Sunrise to sunrise’’

All else is conveyed in the
Modern Zodiac

Hence everything happens in
Phases and natural Time periods
With slight variations
Interdependence on
ENVIRONMENT
CIRCUMSTANCES
and
HEREDITY/ (GENETIC FACTORS)

Time thus becomes the
True and Valid God

But only we don't appreciate
what will really happen
when that Time comes
that’s why
Time becomes alone
and is
‘’TIME IS CLASSIFIED as an UNIVERSALGOD’’
Creation of the human mind

We all are just born
to live a life of our own choosing
then when that TIME comes
We just simply Die
and even don't seem to know
to say
Good Bye

When!
As Time becomes an inescapable
inevitable God
it also encompasses
Environment
(which envelopes this Contest of seasonal autumnal changes)

But a superficial god is needed for controlling the masses and mobs, sensibly
So don’t hurt any or doubt their individual faith keep on fighting for your nation
We alone are its future everlasting creatures as creators,
generation after generation
since ages passed and ages hence

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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An untidy write about my pet hate.. Man made time !
If you need to control all the things around you make it moment by moment and call it "Time" I can pay you for your time but as my clock states you will be paid to the last man made second.. OH! for freedom from this spaced out thing that dictates all we do
I wonder what the true measuring object is, Relative position might just as well do. Par secs ????
We live we die, that in between space is ?????
I shall retire and think of something real,
Love you Loved, Yours Ian ..

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In
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Hour from the word Horae
[hawr-ee, hohr-ee]
Examples Word Origin
plural noun Classical Mythology.
goddess of the seasons, of cyclical death and rebirth, and sometimes of social order, usually given as three in number, with the names Dike (Justice), Eunomia (Order), and Irene (Peace).
I wonder where the origins of the hour came from and who made it in the first place.
Was it "BC" Before clocks, had we been in the metric era I wonder how many hours there would be in a day.
I didn't dislike your write it is a pet hate of mine about time.
The need for a standard thing to measure against is paramount. It is a pity that we chose one rotation of the Earth as a stable and one circuit of the Sun as another..
We can now calculate most things now with the frequency of light this improves our calculations of the world around us ..
Take care young Loved, and know you are the young Bard, Yours Ian ..

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Unconditional love to you all.
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I guess time might be considered an environmental factor created by man. But did time exist before man? no way to know. It's the chicken and egg thing isn't it? Now the using of succeeding generations to capture eternity and thus conquer time is a good one........stan

I see this month's content
about the Oct contest
has a different vein
than normal
So be it
let's see
Time and environment are twins Stan

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Did you know that the egg came first as Dinosaurs laid eggs before we even had chicken LOL,
Take care young woodsman and know we walk the same paths but at different speeds ,
Yours as always Ian.T

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
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and stan whether time existed before man
but of course
the planets after the sun ran
in hope!
then when man was made firm of mind
not like ours chickens kind
then My poem reread and find
intelligence is the order of the day
TODAY
SAD>>>>>> many can't display

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Best wishes Lovedly for the contest ...have fun..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

thanks
but i never now bother about winning
Have reached my life's pedestal Raj
but still so kind of u

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