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Owl Haiku

Submitted by gregwa8 on Sun, 2018-09-30 02:44

the owl's ribbed coo
like feathered hands, massaging
my taut, anxious soul

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Sun, 2018-09-30 08:15

Spot on nicely done

Sun, 2018-09-30 13:57

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