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Rainbow

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Thu, 2018-09-06 15:52

Nice and cool
Rain fall cools us all
Heat of day
No longer burns

Large puff clouds
Align blue skies
Dense rain clouds
Scattered showers

Sunset in the West
Rainbow in the east
Steady rain fall
Soaked Mother Earth

Blue skies again
Dusk falls on us all
Daylight time changed
Nighttime by eight instead of nine.

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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raj

Fri, 2018-09-07 05:37

good one Barbara creating a picture of nature during day time change....wonder though if sunset in the east is right since sun sets in the west..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

Barbara Writes

Fri, 2018-09-07 12:14

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