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Wealth [Runic Symbol: Fehu]
w e a l t h is a lifetime of material and spiritual experience
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How does this theme appeal to you?
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inspired by the Runic Symbol Fehu meaning wealth. Those interested in knowing about Runic Symbols may use the link
https://www.instructables.com/id/How-To-Read-Runes/
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Comments
tyro
Fri, 2018-08-10 10:20
hi raj
this one certainly has profundity in it; but I question if you need, in life.
w e a l t h is a lifetime of material and spiritual experience, this line on its own suggests that the 'wealth' is the spiritual and material experience accumulated in life.
(aside: in one of my poems the suppository for this wealth was the soul)
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
raj
Sat, 2018-08-11 04:37
thank you Tyro for reading
thank you Tyro for reading and your good words....in fact I was also contemplating a lot if or not to add "in life" ...but since you also felt that it is unnecessary...i will remove it...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Mon, 2018-08-13 02:41
Raj
A thoughtful liner as usual. here raj, However, I agree with tyro about removing the "in life". I thought it is clear without it.
Well done friend.
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raj
Mon, 2018-08-13 05:09
thanks dear friend Rula...i
thanks dear friend Rula...i thought I had already deleted "in life"...done it now...
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raj (sublime_ocean)