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Poe-tree
If roses were poems
would they bloom
poetic blossoms
with anodyne rhymes,
and ambrosian perfumes?
Style / type:
Free verse
Last few words:
Just a thought. Silly?
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Tue, 2018-07-24 14:09
Hi Rula
nice thought provocative mini poem...in my opinion you may see if it works better by deleting "what" in L2 and move the question mark at the end....just my thought...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Tue, 2018-07-24 14:45
Much better
dear raj.
Much appreciate the read and your talented thought to ameliorate this mini poetic thought.
Thank you.
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raj
Tue, 2018-07-24 14:54
good to know Rula that the
good to know Rula that the suggestion worked for you...forgot to mention in the previous comment on how nicely you have created the title...
now coming back to the question
If roses were poems......?
i can only say you have taken me on another thought wave...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Wed, 2018-07-25 02:10
Thank you raj
It's always good to know that you've been an inspiration to others.
Always curious to see how should others think about the same title/theme...etc.
Isn't that wonderful?
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scribbler
Tue, 2018-07-24 15:27
Hi Rula
They' be so only
if written well
those written badly
would surely smell...............stan
Rula
Tue, 2018-07-24 15:33
Haha
absolutely!
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raj
Tue, 2018-07-24 15:56
perhaps one of the poems the
perhaps one of the poems the roses would bloom could be
see me, touch me, feel me
don't pluck me
inhale my essence
"live, let live
life is vulnerable
make most of it
rise above thorns
be dignified"
--Ms. Rose
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Wed, 2018-07-25 02:12
Awesome
with a crystal clear message there.
I love everything about roses.
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raj
Tue, 2018-07-24 16:19
rosy poem # 2
I'm a fashionable girl
wearing frocks in ethnic colors
seducing bees and butterflies
they flirt, kiss, tap dance
get hooked on my honey
keep returning for more
Alas! if they had noses
would get mesmerized
by my intimate aroma
...Ms. Rose
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Wed, 2018-07-25 02:51
lovely!
who said that roses aren't the most beautiful thing.
Thank you for sharing your rich rosy thoughts raj.
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lovedly
Tue, 2018-07-24 16:28
If I was a poet tree I'd compose at least three
poet tree 1
Roses we love
as roses symbolize
last word above
give me a rose
and say
which girl does not
with Lovedly want to play
a game of Love
lol
lovely display
poet tree 2
shall add more
if only Rula does agree
why in the storm
bash her poets greenery
poetry 3...
is in the thinking
will ink it at the appropriate time
yes but naturally timely
raj
Tue, 2018-07-24 16:40
I am with you
I am with you
through thick and thin
changing hands on Valentine's
I am with you
when church bells ring
and you say I do
I am with you
when it's time to bid adieu
paying my tributes in dew
...Ms. Rose
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raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Tue, 2018-07-24 16:42
my raj
how sweet is your Rosy
who and where is she
must be lovely
see my blog
there she now may be
flowering merrily!!!
lol
Rula
Wed, 2018-07-25 02:57
Write on
My friends....
Thank you for the adorable tributes raj and lovedly.
I think roses deserve it all and even more.
Thank you for sharing!
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