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A star is born Senyru
A new star was born
Traveled through the birth canal
Nova Skye arrived
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Congrats my sixth grandchild is born 8 lbs 13 ounces Shortly after nine am
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raj
Thu, 2018-07-19 05:29
Barbara very nice Senryu..
Barbara very nice Senryu...the line "travelled through the birth canal" captured my attention...
suggestion: would "arrived" be a good replacement to "is here"
Congratulation to the grandma and parents of the newborn
Wishing Nova Skye the very best in life..
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2018-07-25 00:06
Thanks
She a blessing and arrived does sound better
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