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Smoke signals & Shadows dance
shadow is to light
what smoke is to fire
by the same token
a poem should leave
a trail of imprints on the sand
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
gregwa8
Wed, 2018-06-13 02:48
cause and effect. i like this
cause and effect. i like this short poem. it inspires me to write, knowing my words will create light and fire, shadows and smoke, if i focus on my craft.
raj
Wed, 2018-06-13 05:05
Thanks Greg for reading and
Thanks Greg for reading and connecting spot on with the underlying message. Wishing you the best of inspiration to write..
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raj (sublime_ocean)