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on the road to PARADISE

Meet me on the road
as from Niagara
to Paradise I go

meet you in the tulips garden all know
on to the road of Ottawa
meet me next to the lovely
redish tulip flower

I am now on my way to Ottawa
come over with folks entire
meet me all
if you have the desire

read me kick me
or
whatever
Lovedly is
enroute to Ottawa
with a chauffeur driven
driver

hello all ...meet ...me come (pun) all
guys can enjoy a
waterfall
gals a great
Ball!!!

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Sounds like a good plan,
but what is
"chauffeur driven driver"?

IRiz

I wanted to see whether folks really read
for ''''driver'''
Iriz please do read
CAR

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It is a silly trap, my friend. Hugs to you.

IRiz

'twas all
returned with tulips smell only
thank you
4 reading me

author comment

My pleasure, could you start writing less and more seriously,please? Life is short!
Write a poem about your first memory. Please.

IRiz

i suffer from
verbal diarrhea

first memory
yes
but of what
first kiss
by mom
or
siblings
or
gf
or
first love
or
UN-requited love
or
WHAT....

seriously,
I am now becoming serious...
old age now is walking in with a stick
hold my hand
some one
ere Lovedly is finally done
else
before some one orders a cremation
should I this poem abandon
i.e. un-publish it

for softer memories
tulips of Ottawa
only
Mi Lady...
I bow to thee!!!

author comment

I like your tulip-poem, don't unpublish please.

IRiz

you make me feel
like I come alive

won't unsubscribe
let all vie

Lovedly to none said goodbye
all came to take away
the pure perfume
of VICTORIA'S TULIPS
on HRH 's Day

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Re Return from Home
I came back home just to read your RETURN

Then I found it again I'd read it last time I was in Spain
But the other day I went back to my village
Cemented forests now
I had to ask the guy the way
to where I'd once lived

He smiled
you are standing on it
now levelled to the ground
all but a small bit
to allow you the bird's eye view
that you'd love to see
of a birth place
all want to return
whenever if ever

So I returned back away from home
now
NO more a HOME

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IN EXTINGUISHABLE FLAME

Handicapped and Deprived earn Compensation

VERY BEAUTIFULLY PUT ACROSS
I did not know
thanks for showing my blindness
a candle

I thought I was deaf alone
Milton to the world is known

PARADISE LOST
then
PARADISE REGAINED
AT LAST NOT IN VAIN!! !

Those who don't have wealth
profess
there is no need of greed
God will give...

Those who are not beautiful
say
why bother darkness is beauty
all its way,

the night is much brighter
when the moon sleeps
there comes out in full form
the vast distant galaxy
as if a million candles had been lit

I am that
CANDLE
which ignites of its own
let there be about me
folks well known
their light shall extinguish
gradually of its own

but I will become renowned
as the candle I lit
would by then be found...

what of Nobel
he doesn't even know
who gets what

But the FLAME OF LIFE ALONE
KEEPS THE CANDLE FOR EVER LIT

I am such a one
found not in temples and churches
but out in the open

just come and see me
the FLAME IS ETERNAL
COME AND SEE

BE A part of the
Flame of LIFE
in me

Be an eternally lit candle
the whole world will see
present and future admirably

be O poet a poet
A PLUME OF TIME
INEXTINGUISHABLE

Will ye also be

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