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Vita Vegan:
With diet Vegan
Vigorous and healthy lifespan
Energized atman
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
I welcome all comments - positive and negative. I just have one request: please refrain from being profane so that our brain can rise above the mundane and aim for a higher plane.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Rula
Mon, 2018-05-07 12:29
Totally agree
Did you mean to say ( at man?)
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OriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-05-08 06:09
Thanks for your input Rula
Atman refers to a soul (derived from the Sanskrit Atma - essence of the Universe). Please take a look at my other poems and I would appreciate your review.