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Morning Walk [Sunku WS]
Gentle
caress on
naked soles
Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs
Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds
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Rula
Thu, 2018-03-01 10:14
What
a clever play with words here raj.
If I am not wrong this tells much about the beauty of nature. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
Regards
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raj
Thu, 2018-03-01 12:47
You are spot on Rula. The
You are spot on Rula. The give away is in the last two words :) Thanks for being a rare visitor to my posts...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Thu, 2018-03-01 12:51
It's always
a great pleasure dear raj!
You are a so talented poet. I read you not only to enjoy but also to learn.
Thank you!
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raj
Thu, 2018-03-01 12:53
Heartfelt thanks Rula for
thanks from my heart Rula for your kind words...
I do likewise with your posts too and almost always there are some good take aways...
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sat, 2018-03-03 10:26
AND I have been wating like Rula says
yeah following since last millenia
yet I am unable to learn
and
poetry like you raj
churn
when will my mind burn
hopefully in its own turn