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Too Many Slogans (sunku)

Submitted by Captain on Mon, 2018-02-26 20:02

Too Many Slogans

Believe or
Don’t move at all
Like pray

Take my
Mind and pull
Your way

I’ll let
You slip off
Like glass

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Captain

Mon, 2018-02-26 20:02

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just trying this out :)

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IRiz

Mon, 2018-02-26 22:01

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Welcome to the workshop
Your mysterious sunku will be my food for thought.
Bye for now, I am off skiing

IRiz

Captain

Tue, 2018-02-27 19:31

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skiing! I don't get much of that in the desert. :) Hope your staying warm!

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