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Sunku 7
Little vile
Inevitable fate
Tastes so sweet
Skull bones
Switch blade
Feels so right
Familiar taste
Venomous snake
Never again
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2018-02-26 21:10
I really like...
what you have written. I like the vehemence, the vicious vein of lines. Makes Killer want to stalk the streets again.
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lonlyhrtsclub13
Mon, 2018-02-26 21:13
a woman scorned
Is never a good thing. But that familiar taste of poison always seems to be lurking. Perhaps killer needs to visit
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
weirdelf
Mon, 2018-02-26 22:49
Again, syllable count way off, but good.
My reading
https://vocaroo.com/i/s19sP1CWv44b
cheers,
Jess
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weirdelf
Tue, 2018-02-27 04:32
Not a Sunku,
rhe subku is defined b'it threed stanzas and in exh kine,
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry