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Sunku 16 Workshop “Summer's Ensemble”
Summer
Is popping
with nature buzz
animals
insects
ensemble chirps
arrived
summertime
Gaia’s Kingdom
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raj
Mon, 2018-02-26 14:30
Barbara
I will look out for the edits you make for which there is room..your Sunku inspired this
Beyond
the Spring
I hear a buzz
Beetles
chirping
summer songs
Others
join party
from their nests
......
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2018-02-26 14:44
Beautiful raj
I’m weird like that. It’s still spring and everything is drowsy about waking up but I hear them as if they are awake alive and buzzing all around.
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raj
Mon, 2018-02-26 14:54
Stanza 3 could be
Stanza 3 could be
Soon
our tails swing
in boogie dance
....
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2018-02-26 15:35
Nice raj
I’m visualizing the ending as a Kingdom like the lion king movie but with the whole planet involved as a Kingdom
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raj
Mon, 2018-02-26 15:37
Yep
That's what was the intended purpose in sync withe the "Ensemble" in your title
....
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2018-02-26 15:43
Yeah
Glad it worked
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weirdelf
Mon, 2018-02-26 22:57
excellent
https://vocaroo.com/i/s10M1MgDzhAB
cheers,
Jess
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Barbara Writes
Tue, 2018-02-27 13:15
Thanks
I appreciate your visit as always
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