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NIGHT NOISES (SUNKU)
midnight
bell tower
gong bang delight
trolleys
twirl waltz time
in moonbeam bright
High sky
piccolo
sings lullaby
sewer
viola
steam minor key
poet’s
candle-lit
orchestra pit
Last few words:
Being asked to give it a try.
2/3/4 syllables in repeated verses.
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Fri, 2018-02-16 13:57
You may want to send a formal
You may want to send a formal request to IRiz or Weirdelf to enroll you as a participant of this WS. Just a suggestion...
regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
IRiz
Fri, 2018-03-16 19:30
sounds of night town!
sounds of night town!
very clever and fresh alive imagery
thank you for sharing your poem
IRiz