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NIGHT NOISES (SUNKU)

midnight
bell tower
gong bang delight

trolleys
twirl waltz time
in moonbeam bright

High sky
piccolo
sings lullaby

sewer
viola
steam minor key

poet’s
candle-lit
orchestra pit

Last few words: 
Being asked to give it a try. 2/3/4 syllables in repeated verses.
Editing stage: 

Comments

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regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

sounds of night town!
very clever and fresh alive imagery
thank you for sharing your poem

IRiz

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