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haiku senyru sunku how about free stylers a Lovedlu

Would you care to create
a brief poetry
on the lines of above
very brief
BREVITY
must convey freely
ADD your piece here only
if you wish
Lovedly 77 nearly + &_

eg of a Lovedlu

O passer by
we came, bye
adoration why!

she loved
sweetness
tasting lips

a demon came
plucked her away
they both vanished

under covered
darkness
all norms abolished

xxxxxxx

Now give your interpretation
to my tone
stick it deep
as do bones
unscathed
you shall vanish

Any takers
welcome here

NOTE
This version of
Lovedlu
has been inspired by a poet
asking me to read his version
on Valentine
14 Feb 2018
CREATIVITY- CUM -BREVITY

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

Your lines
Are inspiring
The poem entices
To join you
On the flight
Of the rhythm and rhymes.
Your lines
Alienate Silence
Giving birth to new words
Lovelihood of my time
Is yours.
I am a bit tired.
I was climbing today.
Hands cannot type.
Fingers don't listen.
But my mind races into a free form
Of primordial freedom and fog

IRiz

I wonder if any one else will follow me too.. y
ou deserve it
let's see
you produce
a Lovedlu
would you....

RHYME nor reason
no, yes there must be rhythm
all is pure imagination
Like Honululu

LOL U

author comment

I think I should stick to
sunku
and
my freestyle poetry
I only knew

Thanks to all for ignoring my
LOVEDLU

author comment
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