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SunKu 1 Workshop
Fighting
To be me
Ain’t that easy
People’s
Opinions
Got it twisted
Shaming
Lost it’s punch
Went straight pass me.
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Comments
IRiz
Mon, 2018-02-12 20:39
the composition, the
the composition, the rhythmical flow, the alliteration you have it all
plus i relate to the content very much
IRiz
Barbara Writes
Tue, 2018-02-13 01:12
That you much
A very fun workshop
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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raj
Tue, 2018-02-13 05:33
So good to read this. Short
So good to read this. Short form being your forte no wonder you picked up the threads of Sunku so quickly. Looking forward to red more.
I think opinion is 4 syllabi..i may be wrong..
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Tue, 2018-02-13 12:36
Thanks raj
Glad you like it. I’ll be writing more as my 24 hour is up lol
I think o·pin·ions is three tho.
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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IRiz
Tue, 2018-02-13 12:57
I agree about the count. Also
I agree about the count. Also I feel that the precise count is not always possible and not always important.
IRiz
raj
Tue, 2018-02-13 14:06
I had mentioned that I could
I had mentioned that I could be wrong in the syllable count and now stand corrected...
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)