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Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2018-02-06 04:50

Ah!
Esker has left
may be I will go
soonly
one never knows

The age is not the leader
but the mind is
so stay as long
as you will
ABIDE WITH ME STILL!

Time alone one day
each one of us kill
But none will know
nor ever did

when 'tis

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Sparrow

Tue, 2018-02-06 19:15

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Just live each day, and thank whoever you find that you believe gave you another day.
Stop all this am I next rubbish, and start to write good poetry, I have asked Jess to start a progressive workshop, starting from the basic poetry, and as he carries on he will with help progress to the best there is, who he takes with him or those that choose to stay with him will attain the best there can be.
Even a chef has to learn to boil water before he becomes a master.
There are many things you can do to help as the workshop diverges as the poets attain more levels.
Take care and don't dwell in yesterday it is a place for memories of all sorts,
Yours as always, Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

lovedly

Wed, 2018-02-07 01:09

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in a million years
that to coming from you
my only well wisher
in neo

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scribbler

Wed, 2018-02-07 13:26

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after a person gets beyond child bearing years then nature is done with them and we are all then on borrowed time. So just be glad for each day..........stan

lovedly

Thu, 2018-02-08 00:25

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We must
as say u Stan

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