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POETRY
Poetry, is not just
The rhyming of some words
It’s an expression of a feeling
Which a heart shepherds
A rhapsody of heart and thought
Immersed in joyful bliss
Or dashed upon those rocks
Of agony’s abyss
Pictures made of words
Painted by a quill
Words that dance and twirl
At the penman’s will
The fusion of a thought
With the gift of soul
Emotions that are freed
Without any control
The sorrow of a heart ache
Set in rhythmic prose
The rhythm of true love
Which, two hearts compose
Visions sketched in words
For everyone to see
Desires and their dreams
In hopes that they will be
The harmony of lyrics
A mind and heart have spawned
Set in melodies of verse
To which, we all respond
BOEMS by JA 413
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Comments
raj
Sun, 2018-01-21 13:47
Nicely scripted & structured
Nicely scripted & structured poem which captures most of what poetry is about...good rhythm and easy on the tongue...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Eniola
Mon, 2018-01-22 04:34
deep
somehow u speak my mind.
Marvel Godwyn
Mon, 2018-01-22 13:56
Amazingly expressed thoughts
Amazingly expressed thoughts Ja Ja.
weirdelf
Wed, 2018-01-31 03:16
A superb poem, Ja Ja
Beautifully constructed and expressed in every way. My only crit- it needs a better title.
cheers,
Jess
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