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Dreams
Dreams are a pathway to a faraway land called dreamland They take me away from the here and now In my dreams I can be anybody anything We all hope our dreams will come true Dreams make reality bearable Dreams are a means of escaping reality With dreams our lives are filled with gaiety
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raj
Thu, 2018-01-11 02:10
suggestion
Theme is good...put it in verse form...your current version is in prose
raj (sublime_ocean)
Simon
Thu, 2018-01-11 10:15
Perfect poem.
Dreams are really partway to unknown, dreams are some how a confusing if we can't properly interpret them thanks for this drop.
Simon
Thu, 2018-01-11 10:16
Perfect poem.
Dreams are really partway to unknown, dreams are some how a confusing if we can't properly interpret them thanks for this drop.