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message for JOE from poet lovedly his old fan

Lovedly
misses him dearly
and
as for after life there is no such thing
really
none has gone beyond the graveyard
6 feet deep.....
including the PHARAOHS
whose body decayed

So live in peace
as you may
there is no heaven
anyway
but if you have a belief
do stay
and
enjoy your present days

who am I to say
what I say
take it or leave it
it's your
FAITH

enjoy those who still come by your way
Lovedly missed you and now
is happy for JOE
you
that still on the Earth you
do stay
do meditate and pray

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Free verse
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Comments

I will give your message to Joe. Thank you, Lovedly.

remember me to him too
he may have forgotten
like another friend
who is suffering from dementia

sad
its the medical will

author comment

Your piece has a choppy cadence that actually works very well, especially formatted the way it is.
unfortunately, (for me) I can relate to this poem.

Well written.

Obi.

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visit and comment
thanks again

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