I love these moments, cherish all that I have been a part of! I'm so glad that technology let's me record them all and keep them online for the future! The photos and VHS tapes of mine and my twin brother's young childhood wear out and so do the VCR players, but I'm recording the next generation on a smart phone digitally, hopefully where they'll last much longer.

And your family (I assume) has their moments saved in your poetry. I think that's wonderful and a great purpose for poetry, to remember.

If I could make a suggestion, I think the rhyme scheme starts off so solid and perfect for the topic, that I had hoped it would continue throughout, but the fourth stanza doesn't fit your otherwise ABCB scheme. I suppose the trouble is that nothing useful rhymes with camera! Maybe rearranging the stanza could work?

What do you think of something along the lines of:

quick, grab the camera
no time to lose,
dad's dancing in pajamas
always ready to amuse/grandparents sure to be confused/usual silly dance moves /etc

Hope this helps. I'm sure you know you don't have to use my suggestions if you don't want to!

Happy Holidays,
Kelsey