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The Voice of Christmas Past... Memories of Holidays Past contest
The voice of Christmas Past
keeps whispering in my ear
I don't want to go with him
I'm pulling back in fear
“Come on, he says, for a while
I won't hurt you much”
I just want to show you
you need a Christmas touch”
“Bah, Humbug, leave me be
you're a bit of moldy bread
Just a dream I'm having
I shouldn't eat, then go to bed”
His touch is cold, ice in my heart
hand held in frozen fingers
“See, the school you used to go to
there is a memory that lingers”
Third grade Secret Santa
I remember tears so well
Pick-up sticks for a present
I gave a silver bell
The tears I cried were silent
but the sobs were in my voice
The teacher asked me why
and said, “You should rejoice”
I felt foolish and too proud
so I never said, the reason
But now, I see it better
in that long past Christmas season
I hope that little girl
that was gifted with a bell
rang it every Christmas season
Pick-up sticks are #%&*ing swell!
So lesson-learned, Christmas Past
take me home right now!
It's better giving than receiving
go on, take a bow!
As I sat back to watch the snowfall
my stomach rumbled once or twice
and I thought Christmas Past should stumble
Break his ass upon the ice.
Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
Mon, 2017-12-11 22:06
We all
Have our ghosts of christmas past....good story, good imagery with your usual twist of humor. Love it.
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
lovedly
Tue, 2017-12-12 06:15
Humbug, leave ...me be
blah! lots I see are now saying
Humbug,
leave...... me be
instead of
let me be
what's really the difference
do enlighten me
Gee
Geezer
Tue, 2017-12-12 15:54
It's just...
a matter of vernacular. A good question though! ~ Gee.
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lovedly
Fri, 2017-12-22 23:39
kindness
and thanks for the appreciation.
I am known for the questions I ask
it helps guys improve///research
and
get GOLD
now I am getting bored and old
soonly may be like ESKER
COLD
Captain
Fri, 2017-12-22 15:16
Great rhyming schemes! as
Great rhyming schemes! as usual. And funny! Merry Christmas Geezer!
Captain
Geezer
Sat, 2017-12-23 09:20
Thanks Captain...
A Merry Christmas to you too! Have a dram of the Captain for me will you, Captain?
~ Geezer.
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brittle light
Sat, 2017-12-23 09:32
I hate thinking about my past
I hate thinking about my past. All scenarios cast me as the jerk, never quite on the mark with anything.
but I suppose that shows some growth and maturity, (that I recognize my past foibles)
nice piece you have written
regards,
Al
ps hope you have liability insurance for broken asses
Al
Geezer
Sat, 2017-12-23 10:25
@#$% him...
I rent! And you can't get blood from a stone, I got nothing he can sue me for!
~ Gee.
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