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BECAUSE OF LOVE
Because of love, we saw each other and our eyes met . Loud sound of my heart clasping within my chest echoed even moments after you left.
Because of love, we couldn't stop thinking of each other, and I wonder in my mind, why I keep remembering those eyes.
Because of love , our path crossed again and we smiled at each other like long lost friends at a reunion.
Because of love, we prayed and hope and wished and dreamt of meeting again.
And because of love, we met yet again and couldn't let the chance of exchanging words slip us by.
Because of love, we became inseparable friends that shares all and nothing.
Because of love, we spend time together saying nothing and still feels we had the best time of our lifes.
Because of love , we disagree to agree and can't stay apart from each other.
Because of love, together, forever and always we will never part.
All these and alot more just because of love.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Marvel Godwyn
Tue, 2017-11-14 11:06
Love does the uninmaginables.
Love does the uninmaginables. It's indeed a strong chemistry. A beautifully composed poem, Wemimoyikanye.Thanks for sharing and a warm welcome to Neopoet.
wemimoyikanye
Thu, 2017-11-16 04:21
Thanks
I appreciate the warm welcome, and thanks for the comment
author commentSparrow
Sun, 2017-11-19 19:24
Wemimoyikanye
Good to see you here,
Have a look at others poetry and see how they split up the lines and the paragraphs with end rhymes and many other ways of setting out your words.
This is the best place to learn this sort of way of writing, also read some of the classics way of doing things.
Just ask for any help there are many here that will assist.
Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
wemimoyikanye
Fri, 2017-12-08 04:18
Because of love
thank you very much.i am open to critiques. that will make me learn.i will read through as advised.
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