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to punctuate this lovely poem, and to just change a few grammar things and spacing.

If it is for her
Then I’ll kill my blame.
All men aren’t the same-
Her appearance speaks pain
But revenge is vain,
Emotion stolen,
Gate broken,
Oh, sweet tongue of mendacity!

God punishes love;
The rat eating your heel and fanning you.

I'd rather be
The Mississippi of tears for your sake.
Her hate hovers like tsunami.
Can I still love?

She laments.

Not even sure if you need the last line, but the poem has very strong empathy, flow, rhyme used in some parts not others..this I think is fine, like in modern music how atonal sounds are mixed with melody, or in art how subjects are mixed with abstraction.
Maybe as well you might consider a different title...perhaps even "SHE LAMENTS".