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REFLECTION

Submitted by Ja Ja on Sun, 2017-10-15 09:49

When you see the moon
Come and take me by my hand
Walk us on the moonlit beach
Then sit us on the sand

Put your arms around me
And ask me what I see
I’ll say, the moon and its reflection
In the waves, upon the sea

You will tell me, I’m your moon
And so, forever will you be
My reflection in your heart
For what you mean to me

I will say, that’s why I love you
You make me glow at night
You will say, that’s why you love me
I am, the reflection from your light

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Comments

sewie smalls

Sun, 2017-10-15 13:43

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This piece is really beautiful...i love it, no complaints...just beautiful

AMOGELANG MOKOBANE

Sun, 2017-10-15 19:09

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woah this is good it just has the nice flow nd good meaning

Simon

Mon, 2017-10-16 05:09

Simon's picture

love is intense of mind and you really got this,good work keep it flowing.

Eumolpus

Sun, 2017-10-22 00:15

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to make it fit the meter it needs a few less stresses.

I will say, that’s why I love you
You make me glow at night
You will say, that’s why you love me
I'm the reflection from your light.

See what I mean?

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

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