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Another Untold Story
I would have left
if I don’t love you,
after the beginning,
before the music ended,
even in your highest of high,
and on your days of lowest low,
more so on your most confusing times.
I should have done more,
than wait late into the night
or cooked your favorite dish,
should have watched you in your sleep
and played a mistress in your dreams
should have been more than you expected,
else I should have left before I felt like this..
I could have just walked away,
but I could not just leave,
I could not just run away,
‘coz I know I love you more,
the broken glasses are still on the floor,
I’ll pick up the scattered pieces
And turn the page to another untold story.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Marvel Godwyn
Sat, 2017-10-07 10:27
When love is really genuine
When love is really genuine it's always difficult to leave, no matter how badly hurt you are. A nice poem arja and thanks for sharing.
arja
Thu, 2017-10-05 20:08
Thank you very much for
Thank you very much for taking time to read and your comment is added encouragement for me to write better pieces.
sewie smalls
Fri, 2017-10-06 18:49
I really love
This poem...although I haven't being in love...i know leaving someone you genuinely love is the hardest thing to do...nice poem, I love it
arja
Tue, 2017-10-10 00:02
Thank you very much for your
Thank you very much for your kind words..
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