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All Love is

What is Love
but a deprivation
of adequacy and submission
of sensuality
may be smokes of sexuality

There must be genuineness of affection
love then becomes intimate
from friendship we switch to loved ones
now becomes it

One must dream
of those passed moments
when love was deprived
moment by moment
but then salvaged by some one
from those lonely occasions
of salty utterances
by some one

Then only real love oozes
as an ultimate outcome

Come some one
love every one

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Free verse
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Comments

When there is genuiness of affection love becomes intimate, That is all love actually is.A true love is enfolded in an unadulterated affection. You have rightly said it all,Lovedly .A stunning poem I must say and thanks for sharing.

stun me Marvel
thanks
hope more will enjoy

author comment

It's my pleasure Lovedly.

love is not all about sex, but genuineness of Affection.
i really enjoyed the poem
nice one lovedly

always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing

coming from Nigeria
A place from where came
my school girl friend

author comment

It's impressing and passionate

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