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Autumn Nears September Contest

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Sun, 2017-09-03 21:57

I usually awaken at 7 am;
Was surprised to rise at 6 today;
Even the sun seemed brighter,
An hour early, at sunrise.

It's a new day, autumn is near;
Soon greens will fade;
Browns, yellows will evade,
Trees everywhere.

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lovedly

Sun, 2017-09-03 22:23

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we also have autumn
now nearly birthing
but twill take
here another month
as usually
autumn trees are lovely
come over and see
what lovely
colorful leaves

I compose
lovely autumnal poetry
when I see beautiful
trees shedding leaves

scribbler

Sun, 2017-10-01 16:46

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Sorry i missed this one until now, A succinct poem about coming changes

Barbara Writes

Mon, 2017-10-23 09:38

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I’m going through changes coming out a butterfly. Letting everything everyone go that’s hindering my self worth. My path is clear

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