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hold on mom I'm coming..(In waiting Q....)
My mom passed away early
Beautiful mom yours
I once composed
''MOM SMILES''
If you have some time
over a week end
do smile
my mom also will love you
She may not be able to give you a ring
she has no Internet connection now
where ever she may be
but daily she sends a dozen kisses for me
through the winds
and
I fly back kisses daily
the clouds carry them slowly
but deliberately
She still smiles
back at me
No one ever reached 90
in my family
nor will me
you may see
I am just about to be touching 80
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Comments
lovedly
Fri, 2017-05-19 02:14
You may change
dailyx2
as you like it
at one place daily
the other gaily
choice is yours
friends mainly
lovedly
Fri, 2017-05-19 02:26
Quick looks both poems
My mom passed away early
Beautiful mom yours
I once composed
''MOM SMILES''
If you have some time
over a week end
do smile
my mom also will love you
She may not be able to give you a ring
she has no Internet connection now
where ever she may be
but daily she sends a dozen kisses for me
through the winds
and
I fly back kisses daily
the clouds carry them slowly
but deliberately
She still smiles
back at me
No one ever reached 90
in my family
nor will me
you may see
I am just about to be touching 80
Mom's Smiles
Very sentimental poetry
I recall my mom’s last eyes
no tears
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away
it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I, my mom can see
smiling with me
It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
are you still waiting for me
lovedly
Sat, 2017-05-20 14:13
not becoming 80 yet
shortly may be
if I survive my ailing malady
lady
audrie
lovedly
Sun, 2017-05-21 02:23
I have great will power ...see I survived Neos
and
in actual life all these years
with mostly woes
shall still more
if my WILL
does assure
and that's for sure
Audrie
weirdelf
Sun, 2017-05-21 17:43
I'm sorry for your loss, dear Lovedly
nothing can replace a Mum.
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Mon, 2017-05-22 01:07
Thats true
but she passed away
49 years ago
as if twas just yesterday
a fhresh
memory even to day
none can replace a mom
as you say
thanks any way....
now I am standing
on the same pathway
to go away
some day
one day
any day
but not today
weirdelf
Mon, 2017-05-22 01:49
[smiles]
not today.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry