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LIKE A FEATHER
LIKE A FEATHER
a feather dances lightly
to the music of the wind
and our mind is lifted ,
by its journey’s end
death’s euphoria floods
our soul with promises
of home and we acquiesce
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Comments
chevyvent
Wed, 2016-11-30 21:03
Very deep aura to piece
As I was reading your poem it had occurred to me true love of poetry.
I was taken a back a bit by the deep aura of the poem.
There is a great mystery quality hidden beneath the lines.
It made me think of Norman Vincent Peale, "What the mind perceives this it can achieve".
Great work & look forward to reading more of your poems,
Mario Vitale
Mario Vitale
Esker
Fri, 2016-12-02 06:16
pure poetry
thank U Joe!
Mr Steven!
lovedly
Sat, 2016-12-03 11:58
poetry poetry
and
purely true poetry
coming from the quill
of poet
Joe
all must know
who is Joe!
Candlewitch
Wed, 2017-01-04 11:41
hello,
great imagery in the making of this piece! and another year passes... we journey on, eventually to the great unknown!
*hugs, Cat
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