Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

"Changes"

I have asked two of our poets to post a poem that has the title changes.
It can be posted here as a comment, just to see the variety of poetry we can produce with just one word.
Open to all that need to change or have seen a change.
Take care out there and know that someone loves you for who you are not what you pretend to be..
Yours Ian.T

Comments

when one is blind ..
half only
dimmed eyes...
also deaf ...
ninety five percent ..

has all the time
in the world ..
in this vast loneliness..
you call
wilderness...

what can one expect
but change
from one ..
in emotional sense ...
like non sense ...
but to make it,
life,
active too ...
one needs to keep with time true ..
change...

old age is just
a physical number ..
at heart
we have to remain
much younger ..
all others
will gloss over ..
as if
we are in slumber
SILENT NUMBER..
change eh!.
to zero! no!

One of your better works thank you,
Yours Ian..

.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

author comment

good better best
but when will u ever say
B E S T

I would have to know the future to know that any of your pieces are going to be at some stage elevated to the top of your works.
One day if we are remembered by others there in the future they will select one of your poems to become the Best.
Rather they selected a few, and said this is a selection of Loved's work and will be remembered for :- whatever is in Vogue,
Take care young Bard, only when you leave this realm will your work be judged by other, there in the light of the universe you will judge yourself,
Yours Ian..

.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.