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Life is like a River

The Thames
Hudson
Mississippi
Lawrence
Amazon
Nile
Ganges
Jumuna and Brahmaputra
all move on
so does like wise man
nothing strange about it
we finally merge with the ocean of Time
in the Cosmos
Eternity
Infinity and Wilderness
all meet at one point some time
as also souls, if any,
of human kind
but that is only known to unseen Divine
so all keep on penning poetry
indelibly
All still read thee
At least I do

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

the message comes out clear
capitalization works well
use of punctuation adds
Good beginning
central plot
and finishing

Thank U!

I like the positive message!

thank you esker

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