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O dad where are you..,Now
When dads go away young
they leave behind memories
so fresh
these never ever age
as dad it appears is here still
but who can fight
against an unknown
unseen gods will
We alone have to severe grief
and our left over time kill
I wonder if dad knows or ever will
he must be ether by now
waiting my merger...
O dad
where will we meet
do indicate an RV
and tell me
how I will recognise thee
O heaven believe me
Dad did love me
Only
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Comments
Vivovon
Sat, 2016-09-10 23:05
in limbo
My thinking is that we all meet in the carbon and nitrogen cycles. The thought is very materialistic. It does not mean that I do not entertain the thought of a place where I may meet my parents and loved ones. Perhaps, I am in limbo. So bad! No matter what, I do like your poem and your thoughts.
I am still on earth, but I do believe that Dad only loves you.
Thank you for sharing.
xxxxx
lovedly
Sun, 2016-09-11 00:49
amen for your lovely thoughts
hope dad catches up at my arrival
Keith Logan
Mon, 2016-09-12 09:39
I'm glad
you have happy memories. Those are yours forever. I won't comment on people's beliefs but if they give you comfort that is the important thing.
Keith Logan
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lovedly
Mon, 2016-09-12 09:51
good advice
thank you
but tis my mission to share
what I feel
take it or leave
'tis your own individual belief
Marvel Godwyn
Wed, 2017-11-01 04:05
A very stunning write Lovedly
A very stunning write Lovedly. I hope he sees and hears you wherever he is now.
lovedly
Wed, 2017-11-01 11:48
thank you so much Marvel
hope he does
but in actuality all is a finale
unknown mystery
as there s no beyond beyond
we all know it
but regret to add
none accept
Thanks for you lovely comment
it does flare up in one's mind
a reasonable sympathetic solace
Marvel Godwyn
Fri, 2017-11-03 20:15
You are welcome, Lovedly .
You are welcome, Lovedly .