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Live and Let Die
So many against one another.
Watching souls plunge; freedom suffers
From liberty, money, power
Respecting only society's hour.
Live and let die......
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Free verse
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Esker
Sat, 2016-07-02 18:21
Right to Bear arms!
freedom and libertines!
many feel it..
many do it
from clubs and implements
caves to caverns
watchtowers to radar
We have come a long
way...to the end
of peace!
sad but true
reaping the ruin
thank U!