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Another sunset another sunrise

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2015-12-13 13:28

Another sunset another sunrise

The sun as it sets simply says....
give others a chance....
as in the mid of night
you romance.....
as you dance and prance...
let others warm up too
it’s like another cold world....
hope all this knew...

as there is only one sun
you can heat up
in a modern environment
many need the sun more...
as poverty is now on shore..

so the sun smiles...
at the passersby
as others smile
to welcome the tearing
Okay De-virginising of mist...
ere the dawn
of a freshly awakening morn

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Buddha

Mon, 2015-12-28 23:35

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There is only one sun, one earth but many lives. Only one moon but many lovers. Your poem conjures up many beautiful images. Buddha

lovedly

Tue, 2015-12-29 00:30

lovedly's picture

thanks the Buddhali
for reading me

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