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Enchanted

Enchanted

I visualise the silkiness
Of the form of clay,
That houses thy soul today
And
Silent love it does display
And
You say tis enchantment,
Comes my way

I know the sighs
That you heave silently though
And
For that my body
Like a branch does bow
But it’s a long journey
Into a universe, another one,
When enchantment
The real meaning you would know,
As time is against us that’s a no show.
.
You are at the bottom
Of the ladder on step one,
My life has reached its zenith,
Fly or wait just a moment,
Twill become extinct
Any second

Still my sweet memories
Belie the truth
Of some remote desire
Some day may we become one?
If God has in mind,
Another way
In another secret universe
Then perhaps enchantment
May come to play

Style / type: 
Free verse
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came from a LONDONER
/UK
GR88888888888888 poet
PERHAPS YOU MAY KNOW I CAN'T GIVE HIS NAME THOUGH

he doesn't know
i'm a man or woman
GUY OR GAL
GAY OR LESBIAN
but silently sighs i know

loved

author comment

will anyone ever know? :)

raj (sublime_ocean)

any age can be enchanted by any age.....................scribbler

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