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Innocence lost
The love once shone pure white,
now forever lost from my sight;
A moment lost, I cannot gain back,
of the carefree innocence we now lack
That hour in time eludes capture,
I go on with a wisp of that wonderful rapture.
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musical prayers
Tue, 2011-08-09 16:03
ty for taking the time to
ty for taking the time to read and post your comments, I appreciate it
author commentlou
Sat, 2011-01-15 10:23
HI
This is a very well constructed poem.
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
scribbler
Sat, 2011-01-15 12:06
lost
welcome ! You have shown that rhyming poetry need not run on in length as so many of mine do. Well done..................scribbler
musical prayers
Tue, 2011-08-09 16:04
ty for taking the time to
ty for taking the time to read... appreciate it
author commentJanice Pearce
Sat, 2011-01-15 19:31
Innocence Lost
Patty, was missing you. Glad to see you back, wonderful poem!
musical prayers
Tue, 2011-08-09 16:04
thanks Jan
thanks Jan
author commentEduardo Cruz
Sat, 2011-01-15 23:57
Sweet Patty
Yes, that marvelous innocents, and now there so much truth in all we see that all we can do is hold on to things that first made us happy. not when youg but when we learn the truth of how we could servive it all.
Living always in that moment.
thanks for posting this peice of peace!
Fast Eddie Esq.
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
musical prayers
Mon, 2011-01-17 13:55
Hi all
Its good to be back and to see everyone, so to speak. This has been in the closet of my computer for a long time waiting for neo to come back. And it did, And you're all here,
there is no place like home......Ha Ha Love you all....
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