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Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2015-09-19 13:40

we wish you well
pain can be overcome
by composing poetry
as you do friend
i only hold your morale high up
upon the bamboo tree
some day
one day
we all have to go

why bamboo ?
ask me
its straight and unbreakable
like thee
so be happy
like me
I died in 1977
AND
came alive
just to read your indelible poetry
my mind has so been branded
by
thy poetry

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Rula

Sun, 2015-09-20 15:32

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I wonder who's this poem is written for, but it doesn't really matter. I liked the idea of the bamboo. I thought it's really a clever choice.
Thanks for sharing.

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Geremia

Sun, 2015-09-20 18:52

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:)

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