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wondering words

How do i start where do i begin,
words slowly ebbing away from my mind
not a love poem
not a poem of depression
yet thoughts slip away

a poem in my mind
a few words on paper
a smile playing on lips
a soft whisper upon my ears

yet words alone do they remain
with out feeling
with out passion
words fall all the same

SHOUT them loud
let the impact fade away
until all that remains
are the words said

A mind with out passion
A voice with out feeling
A mind with out direction
A life with out a path

Where do i begin
or have i begun
and am on the way to the end

Style / type: 
Free verse
Editing stage: 


i liked this soliloqy...

raj (sublime_ocean)

You need to reply to comments then your works will not be lost this is a busy site and poems just drop out of sight.
I like this write but I think you have much more to give, Yours Ian.T

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I kinda like the way this describes the writing process....or the Not writing process at times lol........stan

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