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And where is GOD?

And where is GOD?

The only thing impossible is
one can't find God
FAITH
we must still have

there must be a power
beyond the beyond
some day scientists will
fetch HIM/HER

from eternity to eternity
but you and I will not be!

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You even question God or the existence of God.
Is he/she an invention because we are incapable of reasoning it all.
From the dark ages when all things were new and for a long time frightening to many.
What other thing from way back would hold races of people in check, I think that those that use the fear of the unknown faired the best, fire and brimstone will be rained on your head,
Quite a fairy story to behold.
The Spiritual ways have even become corrupted where the thoughts of Buddha are modified to their modern uses, I wonder where the original teachings are.
Samarian writings are similar to the old testament and are a history to be taken with much salt.
Man adapts many things and corrupts many so that he can live with his conscience.
My beliefs are mine so they are only valued for me and leave it to others to thrash around looking for a God.
I ask only one thing, "Do you need a God??"
can you not behave to others without a threat..
Not really a poem but more of a seeking,
Yours Ian..

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o Ian only u read me
you r my god
b happy

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Leave things as they are I was just preaching lol,
Take care young Bard,
Yours, Ian

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

u preach and
I beseech eh!

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The question you posed is for anyone that reads to make up their own answer.
Not to worry about right and wrong let the others decide, I am sure they can all think..
Yours Ian..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

we all here r
mature enough

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why? I don't.
I do, however agree
"there must be a power
beyond the beyond
some day scientists will
fetch HIM/HER"
Just another General Theory of everything.

cheers,
Jess
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u alone r the GENERAL
Jess
I this always profess

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