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true friendship all NEO'S

True friendship

Life given to human ...is by the energy of creation
solar at the helm ,...we wander places
mostly lonely and face many adverse traces...

but then when we look up to the sky,
I don't know why ....a guy comes and stands by...
he is the apparition of the angels ....a friend who lends a hand
until our end
such emissaries from heaven.... unknown to human
make you feel the energy from above ....such friends then you love...

kith and kin in modern era ....evaporate
come love me friend ...don't anyone ever hate

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This was beautifully done! Message is real. Your perceptions and understanding of Life are extraordinary.

joe

glad to see u walk across my page
its a distinct honour
where can I come to
Bow
friend and master
of the poetic world
joe

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celebrities love

Why we all love celebrities
have you ever wondered
they are heart and souls
of all humans
like engines
they move us
forwards ,,,,.......

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They are ideal representations of us,

;joe

see even now only you are responding
that means you are better than most

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One of your better type poems, though in free verse it describes the place that we all reach for no matter who we are.
It is the thing that drives us is the important piece, this is where you earn your wings to be blunt.
I think that this place is not above, but the universal energy is us, and within us, and stretches to infinity.
It is what you do with your special place in that pattern of all the ever's, and then some more, an eternity awaits.
I will still have that cup of tea waiting for you young Bard just as for me in think I shall attend, Yours as always, Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

WHY!
plan but accept...
Everything does not happen as per our plans
but we need to accept

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Thank you, we are all alike in most ways, bar that trait we have for free thinking.
We, all, or most all, worry about our destination, can you imagine starting out on any journey/sojourn without a clear Idea as to where we are going.
As with our physical life, the aims of the Spirit can either be enhanced or the journey can be hampered by a simple thing like a bad cold.
But, that a single physical thing is not taken into account is just not on, our sojourn is planed down to the individual atom of our being.
That we can modify our spirit during this time is a reason for being.
You said that you studied the mind at some time, I wonder what the basic philosophy is for being us.
A creature that walks upright and modifies its surroundings to its own needs no matter what, a creature so far up its own ass it cannot see the journey it is on.
And its not even Sunday, not that Sunday matters it is just another object that flashes past the mind as we journey.
So what do we do, we then must make our own life in two ways a physical one and a spiritual one.
Do you take sugar in your tea??
I have had to put a mini bar in my cave as some of the visitors never drink tea they say it is the devils work, lol
Take care young Bard and will talk later, Yours as always, Ian

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

I'll get back on this
you go to ur spiritual cave
as i sleep here
and for u meditate

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I have only Kenyan Coffee at the moment it is smooth and not so strong, though I can get some Blue Mountain for you but you will be requested to comment on my works 11 of at the moment, lol.
Take care young bard,
Yours, Ian

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

love this poem.

far across the world
out of sight
not a kiss,
not a hug
but the love of the art
and words
bind our hearts together
so here I am
saying hi!

Alid

good friend howz ur health?

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still struggling but a bit better.

Alid

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