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If I could wrap my head around these things, I'd be a fly in a spider web

yup.
that's the whole poem.

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Nice to see you posting here again. It makes my heart good to see the older friends.
I thought there is a good thought and a subtext here, but also thought it would have been better if you gave a shorter title and extended your thought a little bit more to give us, the readers a space to enjoy. Anyway I know you when you revolutionize even over yourself.
best regards to you.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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I've lost count.
They are all good causes though.

cheers,
Jess
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Hi Rula, sometimes I turn inside out, and my poems are askance.

Hi Jess. A woman's work is never done. lol.

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Lysistrata was wrong. Lots of sex stops war.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

baby fighters along the way,

Babies live to continue the evolutionary line.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Bravo my Dear!!!!!!!

bravo..

(mr Wolf)

the essence of you right there in that one sentence

love xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

would be nice if after a while you let us know the essence of this write by decoding the abstract...till then you have me guessing...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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