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lovedly returns from the jungles of wilderness

lovedly returns
from the jungles \
of
wilderness

THANKS
I AM STILL ALIVE
HAVE YOU ALL FORGOTTEN ME?
SO EARLY??
YES NOW TIS ME .
POET ANONY
LOVED
and
Lovedly

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Damn it would have been good if you entered bearing a gift of a poetic masterpiece lol.
Welcome back young Bard have you been anywhere interesting, it had better not been the UK or you will be in trouble,
Yours Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

went to heaven to explore
the gardens
of Eden of yore
what for
were they now obscure
no loved
lol
no lovedly
how will we add children more?
poets and poetry does lure
all produce all over the same way as before
Gardens any where will do for sure
but find your opposite pair to ensure
the genes entwine as much as ever before

god released wisdom to all
why seek in the wilderness now any more
go back and in her secure
the gardens will flower as
ever much as before
now no lovers you need to lure
progeny reproduction is the only cure
all ailments subside
that only God will ensure
when you are not roaming about as before..
the end!
Amen

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I'm not well, please forget if not forgive.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

ditto

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

we must be aware
we are what we are
attention seekers of yore
you desire all to be on all fours
rest your mind in peace
ere it does
split in many a piece
still respect the other
why about yourself only bother
your mind needs comfort
so does the one man alone
you need to rest!
so rest

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premature return, I felt ok.
Sorry.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

you mean well
but when one is unwell
i come to know

so many come to me to seek help
you ,may consider

else don't about my ability of being poetic bother
i have composed since age 8
and now i am nearing that many decades ....
believe me you may may not
much water has flown down life's rivers
like Thames /Mississippi etc NILE!

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You deserve better than I often treat you, and you are a much better poet than I often give you credit for.
Remember the gems,

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

gems
gems = poetry
poetic
thanks Jess...

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