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V i o l e t t e c o u e r

Submitted by Esker on Fri, 2015-04-24 13:36

Nuzzle vanilla warmth
extinguished in its
pungent push
like petals swoon
in jealous suns
Bask in vivid
exclamations
sing the sighs
that Loves refreshment
brings

Devour constitution night
each succulent and tender
star like sweets upon
supplicant tongue
innocent airs
tinged with dark need lairs

Slip hips into steady step
streamlined gallant
heady depths

mouthed pronunciations
glossy paragraphs
on thorn gloves
of tenderness

Strict devotion in the
tempo of rain

..

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Seren

Fri, 2015-04-24 16:35

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“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Seren

Fri, 2015-04-24 16:35

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That will have to do darlin' ... you never fail to inspire me ... true

Love Jayne x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Esker

Sun, 2015-04-26 02:17

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I have found this voice too...something deeper and rich
an enunciation pace and sure delivery....spaced
deep and airy.....discard and disregard...and savor and
favor....There is much to be said about working
worlds and words....The Threshold of such heady
imagination and imagery....

Thank You for the comment/z

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emeka ozurumba

Mon, 2015-04-27 04:50

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swishes !!!, lovely

Esker

Tue, 2015-04-28 21:16

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A great word to add to this! that word you use is such an action word
a lot of my words are expressive but I need to focus on an action word
to make my poems communicate more from the stationary abstract
Bravo my friend!

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