this is interesting. Yes everyone have their own perceptions of things and sometimes we agree, sometimes we disagree. This piece acknowledged both. I loved the way you rhyme it all. Smooth flow and the twist at the end is the acceptance of both. Nicely done. It gives me an idea to write this poem.

Listen and you'll hear
the voice of nature
breaks the silence of night
under the pale
moonlight

Alid

The form you wrote in is called a Muse. It is also a soliloquy.
It was an odd, but satisfying ride through your tangents that are nicely pulled together (of a sorts) at the end.

I liked this Raj, the rhyming scheme is refreshingly different and your rhyming is spot on. Can't see any spelling mistakes and grammar all seems good to me!

Only one suggestion: The very last line seemed forced - I will return with a suggestion if so desired! ( but it's up to you of course ). And Wesley didn't mention it, so it may just be me! :) xxxx

I think your poem is well thought out and it's easy to relate to and understand. :)

Keep em coming Raj

Love to you

good and bad
are planted in all books
some like white some black
some love fools
some behave

so never mind
do good or bad
as you alone would
and we should

butt... twas
this one
really good
by all in the well
under stood

I like this poem though i think perhaps there is a few to many words, sometimes to much can restrict the flow. For example.. I wonder what's good or bad , to bungy jump or hold your ground. At times it's good to act mad, pump up, make your heart pound. Hope this helps, though it's still a good poem with a sound message throughout. Regards Roscoe..

I think you want "moot point" where something is open for discussion or depate, or a matter of no practical value or importance becuse it's hypotherical. Whereas the word "mute" to mean silent has no real canonized meaning especially when paired with the word "point"
As I understand from your poem and your last words, you wanted the first one.