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Facts of existence

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2015-03-20 14:40

Facts of existence

We can't totally ignore reality
can we?
anyone who has walked this path once
must know only truth prevails
behind us......

once one has gone
that we call
character and integrity
all else is
WAFFLE ISN’T IT?

Mammals
to include humans
have navels
that only shows...
A and E ..
they too were conceived..

the Internet makes us wiser
day by day....
Theory of genes...
thus prevails

don't monkeys/mammals also
have navels?
go to a zoo and see...

Lead kindly light
out of man made
Blindness

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Simon Smythe

Fri, 2015-03-20 15:46

Simon Smythe's picture

the genetic intelligence code of the internet can go either way.
integrity is valuable only when we have the character to assess new information with an open mind.
but I don't need to tell you about free will,
or the battle between free will and instinct.
some folks think not only that free will separates mammals from humans, but also that it's the work of the devil!
such an education can be found for free on the internet.

thank you for your burst of intelligent query

lovedly

Sat, 2015-03-21 10:38

lovedly's picture

burst

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