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Collective Karma
.
this seminary of relativities
defines
rights and wrongs
miracles and abominations
awe and antipathy
love and loathing
perpetuates the corporeal world of
sensibility
vitality and subsistence
calibrates
the unfavourable and auspicious
evil and virtue
weak and strong
unhealthy and sound
so if come
malakim
messiahs
bodhi....
then needs be
lucifers
mephistopheles
ignorance....
to harmonise
counterbalance
keep the dream
in redeeming equilibrium
.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
raj
Tue, 2015-03-17 10:11
Judyanne
Pheeeew! went top over my head ....since i know not much about these spiritual vibes...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
judyanne
Mon, 2015-03-23 07:19
lol Raj
not spiritual - just saying that here in this particular universe, relativity is the key - therefore, if there is good, there is need of evil in equal part - to keep the balance
thanks for the read and comment
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Geremia
Tue, 2015-03-17 11:06
You got it right, Sounds a
You got it right, Sounds a bit Manichean. The world is a struggle between opposites. There is universal GOOD and EVIL. There is a constant dialectic between the two, but no synthesis in tis struggle is possible,
joe
judyanne
Mon, 2015-03-23 07:19
thanks Joe
for the read and comment
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Sparrow
Tue, 2015-03-17 11:16
Judy
Yes !!!!!!!
Yours if only I could remember who I am after reading all those words, Ian xx
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judyanne
Mon, 2015-03-23 07:20
lol
thanks ian
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
scribbler
Tue, 2015-03-17 17:45
Satan
and Jesus, good and evil, republicans and democrats ! Ying and yang and some other thang lol. All for balance......stan
judyanne
Mon, 2015-03-23 07:20
stan and judy
lol
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)