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renewed at daybreak
Once prismatic brilliance;
brilliant only through borrowed light.
Alone again in darkness, gleaming;
glum, instant companion of a night -
blind to grief and deaf to joy,
save by pristine thought on lone-ward height.
Ever calling, feline caterwauling;
In the distance horizon burning bright.
That sparkle in the eye is rekindled;
Fully renewed at the break of day.
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crypticbard
Mon, 2015-03-16 19:36
sleep on it, they say
Once prismatic brilliance;
brilliant only through borrowed light.
Alone again in darkness, gleaming;
glum, instant companion of night -
blind to grief and deaf to joy,
save by song on lone-ward height.
Ever calling, feline caterwauling;
In distant horizon, burning bright.
That sparkle in the eye is rekindled; Fully renewed, at dawn made right.
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author commentEsker
Mon, 2015-03-16 19:33
prowling nite....
intuition stirs..
like these awareness poems
night..day..
the landscapes in between
good wording
soothing poem
Thank You!
crypticbard
Mon, 2015-03-16 19:38
Thanks Esker
Glad the soothing quality came across the expanse. You are much appreciated.
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