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Time For A New Vehicle
It's time for a new vehicle
Click, click, bang, bang it's a clunker
The struts and ball bearings clicking
It's a nightmare driving this car.
Not knowing when I'll be stranded
It's time for a new vehicle
Never trust family mechanics
They just might take you for granted.
Finally have deed and title
Five years of payments, paid in full
It's time for a new vehicle
My Aveo is a clunker.
Why? Because a car murderer
Did not properly change my oil
Massive oil leak about kill me
It's time for a new vehicle.
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wesley snow
Sat, 2015-03-14 17:48
You are on a roll.
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W. H. Snow
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Barbara Writes
Sat, 2015-03-14 18:12
Wes
Thanks for reading and commenting. Yea I'm on a roll.
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Esker
Sat, 2015-03-14 22:28
You write well....
Always a frolick even of the ordinary.
Thank You Barbara Writes!
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2015-03-15 00:30
Thanks esker
I appreciate the read and comment. Glad you think it's well written. I'm learning a lot from the workshops and contest.
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